Laura your essay is good in terms of the examples you have provided from AS and A2 - I get a real feel for both pieces of work you created. However you do need to place more emphasis on the actual question "Creativity" - how original/ resourceful were you? Remember the 5 key words you pulled out from the Pete Fraser paragraphs - these should have made their way into your essay to keep it relevant to the question. *More on how your creative skills have actually progressed needed. Level 2 12/25
Laura your essay is good in terms of the examples you have provided from AS and A2 - I get a real feel for both pieces of work you created. However you do need to place more emphasis on the actual question "Creativity" - how original/ resourceful were you? Remember the 5 key words you pulled out from the Pete Fraser paragraphs - these should have made their way into your essay to keep it relevant to the question.
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Level 2 12/25